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The Moon

Staring up at the moon tonight
Watching as the clouds pass below it
Always blocking the moon
Yet never blocking out the light

The moon shines through
Even with the dark heavy clouds
It shines through all and disregards clouds
Not letting them discourage it

I wonder how it can be so calm
So determined to win
Never letting the clouds beat it at all
Not once letting them cover it completely

I walk to the side
I walk to the rear
I walk to the front
Each time the moon follows

It’s constantly following me
Whether in front
Behind
Or next to

It keeps its one eye on me
Never letting me out of its sight
Wondering what I will do next
And watching it all

I stare up at the moon
And wonder how it can be
So calm, determined
And worried for me

It watches me, never stopping
But it doesn’t stop me
It watches from a distance
Only having interest in what I’ll do next
Never interfering

I watch the moon
And the moon watches me
©2008-2009 ~BioAlchm
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This is a poem I did a while ago, I was looking up at the moon as I thought of this, idk, it just kinda came to me...^^;;; it's not that great I know, I'm not going for great, I just wanted to post this
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i like this poem.it has really good rhyme structure without every verse rhyming, which is good.and its really a very nice notion,lol.i think you dont give yourself enough faith.

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um...it doesn't have a rhyme structure...I just wrote the words that came to my head, there is no formality to it...

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i know its not intentionally, but even if you didnt mean it, it still has that...kinda balanced ring to it, a structure.

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yeah...I guess...kinda, I just wrote what I wanted, it started as merely a poem that played through my head as I walked and looked at the moon...

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well, congrats to your head then,lol

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